Monday, August 14, 2017

New sports tops!

Dear Ms Daines,

I think it would be a good idea if each House team had their own separate sports tops. I hope you will agree with my point of view after reading this exposition.

If each house had their own tops with the house colour on it it would be easy to who is in what House so if someone wasn't sure what House they were in, juniors for example they could just look at the top to see what color was on it.


Once people got their tops the would have cool unique designs on them and people would like wearing the because they would look awesome! and it would also be made of a certain material that is light and sweat proof so when you play sport with it on its comfy and isn't making you too hot.

 

I think we could have a competition where the House captains pick 5 groups of people from their team and each group comes up with a design to go on their sport top. Once every group has finished the House group has a vote and the design with the most votes goes on the top.

After reading this I hope you have thought about my argument and I also hope you agree.


Sincerely yours,


Acea Holland

2 comments:

  1. I agree that it would be easier to sort all the kids in house coulers.
    It's great and I don't have eney thing you could work on.👍🏻

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  2. Thanks for your post Jacob. I like how you commented on why you agree, but check your spelling of 'colours', or 'colors' (US spelling).

    I think you could probably find something he can work on...can't you?

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